tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8107691223019552782.post1908448230477221849..comments2023-05-08T06:49:22.958-05:00Comments on College and A Novel: ControversyCherryBlossom24http://www.blogger.com/profile/01126686818996768240noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8107691223019552782.post-28936078945042627552011-01-15T09:29:23.669-06:002011-01-15T09:29:23.669-06:00Hi,
I came across your blog, and read several post...Hi,<br />I came across your blog, and read several posts. I was impressed by your divergent viewpoints and also by your passion. That said, I was also a bit concerned. You say that you are interested in writing, and are in fact, writing a novel. If so, congratulations, but a word of caution concerning your writing style and composition.<br />There were several places in your posts where I was finally able to glean your meaning and the point your were raising, but frankly it was a chore. You have a tendency to write long and convoluted sentences, and often include widely divergent concepts and thoughts, and this makes following along almost impossible. I include one of your sentences below, and if you re-read it, you will see that you would have been better served breaking this down into four or five sentences.<br />An example:<br />“Now I can't comment too much on this particular situation as I do not know all the details and could care less about the supposed "Sports Stars" as I do not live in Australia, but from what I have read, and yes I looked up articles about it, is that a 16 year old girl had sex with a grown man, said she got pregnant(which at this point no one but that girl herself knows the full truth as it was said she lost the baby) went to the AFL(Australian Football League)got no real help from them, and did the most stupid and probably rash decision of her short 17 years(she was 17 by the time I found this but was 16 when the sex accrued) by posting nude pictures of some of the football players that she had acquired in some fashion.”<br />I am certainly not trying to discourage you from writing, but rather hoping that you will take the time to polish your prose.<br />Good luck, Bobartquest1https://www.blogger.com/profile/12041335296170184698noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8107691223019552782.post-11010360490415693792011-01-12T16:48:37.722-06:002011-01-12T16:48:37.722-06:00I am not surprised with Sarah Palin's rather l...I am not surprised with Sarah Palin's rather lame remarks following the shooting in Arizona. She blames "the media" for creating "blood libel." Which media is she talking about? Could it be the same media that made her and her daughter incredibly wealthy? She quit being the Governor of Alaska so that she could concentrate on being a celebrity with her book deal, political commentary on Faux News, have a reality show on TLC and have her daughter compete on "Dancing With the Stars."<br />Is Sarah Palin responsible for the shooting in Arizona? No. We are all responsible. We make "larger-than-life" icons of Palin, Rush Limbaugh, Bill O'Reilly, Rosie O'Donnell, and many others. Sensbile, stable people don't allow their drivel to influence them, but even in a room of 100 people where only one is armed and dangerous, the other 99 are in harm's way.<br />I have to hear Palin or even President Obama express any regret for their angry words used in the 2008 and 2010 elections. How irresponsible was it for Palin's website to depict a "gun sight" on Congresswoman Gabrielle Giffords' congressional district and other districts? (And with the words, "It's Time To Take A Stand" above it)<br />We live in the greatest country in the world...it's time to show the rest of the world that we are also the most compassionate country in the world.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8107691223019552782.post-1861500123408427122011-01-12T01:38:08.708-06:002011-01-12T01:38:08.708-06:00To all respected bloggers including College and a ...To all respected bloggers including College and a Novel, please participate in our contest. Please check out our http://advertisement4bloggers.blogspot.com/ if you are interested for earning money online. This probably interests youWe welcome Youhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16180899447533923485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8107691223019552782.post-68584048005382935272011-01-11T19:37:07.691-06:002011-01-11T19:37:07.691-06:00good post...
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